Composition

Line + MassCorot's moveCotman's move

Grouping values

Link the darks into one shape. Link the lights into one shape. Let a mid value hold them apart. Confetti values read as noise; grouped values read as a picture.

A scene has hundreds of separate light and dark patches. A picture has three or four. The difference is grouping: you deliberately join adjacent darks into one continuous shape (the tree, its cast shadow and the dark foreground become one), join adjacent lights into another (sky and the lit field and the pale distance), and keep a halftone between them so they do not touch everywhere. Values scattered evenly across the page, like confetti, read as noise however accurately they are drawn.

Corot's calm comes from this. His foreground trees, their shadows and the near ground are one dark; his sky and distance are one light. Cotman designed a castle as three interlocking flat shapes before he drew a moulding. Squint at either and the grouping is obvious.

To group, you will have to lie a little: darken a halftone that interrupts your dark shape, lighten a dark that breaks your light shape. That is not cheating. That is composing.

Visuals

The same scene with values scattered like confetti, which reads as noise, next to values grouped into three big connected shapes, which reads as a pictureSCATTERED · CONFETTIGROUPED · THREE BIG SHAPESLink your darks into one shape. Link your lights into one shape. Let a mid valuehold them apart.Corot's trees, ground shadow and foreground are one dark. That is why his pictures feel calm.
FigureConfetti versus three big shapes.
Liber Studiorum: Plate 29, Harlech Castle, N. Wales, Cotman, 1838
Cleveland Museum of Art

Cotman, Liber Studiorum: Plate 29, Harlech Castle, N. Wales, 1838. softground etching, from a bound volume containing 48 plates.

Cotman, Liber Studiorum: Harlech Castle. Squint. The castle, its rock and its shadow are one dark; the sky and water are one light; a halftone shore holds them apart.

The Cleveland Museum of Art · Bequest of John Bonebrake

Pitfalls

What

Faithfully recording every small light inside the dark mass.

Why

The dark shape breaks up and the design dissolves.

Fix

Keep at most one or two lights inside a dark mass, and only near the focal point.